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5/14/2015 1 Comment

ACES Gems Part 2: Health Literacy and Checklists

The American Copy Editor Society (ACES) annual conference I posted about last week focused on three main topics: cultural sensitivity, fact-checking, and medical and health insurance editing. I didn’t get a chance to attend any of the cultural sensitivity sessions, but I did make it to several on the other two subjects, and I learned some really valuable information. Here are 4 of my favorite takeaways from those sessions.
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Consider Your Audience’s Health Literacy
Because I currently work full-time as a healthcare editor, the health writing sessions at ACES really resonated with me. Title V of the Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act of 2010 defines health literacy as “the degree to which individuals have the capacity to obtain, communicate, process, and understand basic health information and services needed to make appropriate health decisions.” Although speakers Connie Feiler and Sarah Kastelic from the University of Pittsburgh Medical Center note that the frequency with which a patient needs help reading written material from their doctor tends to positively correlate with a low health literacy rate, health literacy does not always match regular literacy or IQ. In his book Outliers, Malcolm Gladwell offers a prime example of this exception. He cites a study of hundreds of children, all with genius-level IQs, and shows how their socioeconomic status affected their interactions with authority, including doctors. The middle and upper class genius children asked their doctors questions and questioned the answers they received, while the lower class children of equal IQ were quiet, submissive, and didn’t know how to customize their experience.

If you have determined that your audience may have a low health literacy, it is important to summarize information, repeat key messages, and use plain language.

Health Literacy Adisor plain language software
Health Literacy Adisor plain language software
Perform a Plain Language Review
Plainlanguage.gov defines plain language as “communication your audience can understand the first time they read or hear it.” Plain language is certainly vital in patient communication, but the Plain Writing Act of 2010 also mandates the use of plain language for all federal agencies. Geek alert: If I haven’t already lost you, the best is yet to come. Because I edit for a government contractor, I live and breathe plain language every day, so when it came up at ACES, I was all ears. The health literacy session I attended introduced a plain language tool that practically had me salivating: Health Literacy Advisor (HLA) is a time-saving software that works within Microsoft Word to calculate and improve readability. It was created for the health care industry, but it is based on plain language principles that are relevant to anything. It not only stamps documents with readability scores pre- and post-editing, but it has a built-in lexicon with over 12,000 plain-language alternatives and it functions as a search-and-replace. If you work with plain language or edit documents with a reading-level requirement, this is the tool for you.
Create an accuracy checklist and physicallt check off each item
Create an Accuracy Checklist
Check all:
  • Numbers and math Ex: A voice transcription error turned “30 sows and pigs” into “30,000 pigs.” The copy editor should have flagged that as too many to be true!
  • Visuals that distract or misrepresent Ex: wardrobe malfunctions, photo-shopped crowds
  • Biased info Ex: “Health care reform” is a biased phrase itself because “reform” means to bring from bad to good.
  • Superlatives and absolutes Ex: the worst, only, number one, highest
  • Anomalies and unlikely scenarios Ex: baseball in winter; snow in San Diego
Spot check:
  • People’s names
  • URLs and email addresses
  • Phone numbers
  • Titles
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Make Checklists Work for You
  • Physically check each item off by either printing or using strike through.
  • Resume rules: Keep checklists at 1 page or less.
  • Focus on critical errors or steps.
  • Personalize to include individual weaknesses.
  • Keep a separate horizontal-editing checklist (use your TOC for help) for section titles, lists, and tables.
  • If you work on a team, keep a BINGO card of errors to cover each time you catch an error someone before you should have caught before you if they were using your checklist.

Keep a BINGO card of errors and mark a square each time you catch something on the checklist that someone else should have caught

Check ya later!
        Victoria

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5/6/2015 2 Comments

ACES Gems Part 1: The Singular “They” is Okay (and Other Grammar Tips)

The American Copy Editor Society (ACES) held their 19th annual conference (affectionately referred to as Comma-Con) in Pittsburg this year and, by a stroke of good timing, I was able to attend with one of my colleagues! Several big names comprised the speaker list, including editors from Merriam Webster, Washington Post, and American Heritage Dictionary, as well as The New Yorker’s self-proclaimed “Comma Queen.” The sessions brought me right back to my grad school days and easily matched NYU’s lectures in quality. The variety of topics covered, the speakers’ knowledge, the grammar jokes, and even the cat pictures surpassed all of my expectations. Because BuzzFeed already covered the top 30 pet peeves of copy editors, I’m taking the opposite approach and revealing my favorite editing tips and treasures I took away from #ACES2015.
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The Singular “They” is Okay
Every grammar and usage session I attended affirmed that the singular “they” is becoming more and more acceptable. In fact, the only people who are holding back the movement are the stickler copy editors who attended the conference! A panel of lexicographers from Merriam Webster, American Heritage, and Oxford English Dictionary admitted that using “they” as a gender-neutral pronoun to replace “him or her” is perfectly fine. Merriam Webster already recognizes the singular they (see entry b). The American Heritage Dictionary isn’t far behind; their usage panel moved from an 80% rejection rate in 1996 to 55% in 2011, and they predict the trend continuing. "Writers who choose to use they with a singular antecedent should rest assured that they are in good company—even if a fair number of traditionalists still wince at the usage." For those concerned with agreement, Merriam-Webster’s Kory Stamper advises to still use a plural verb with the singular “they,” knowing that it will be understood as singular. (Ex: Remind the caller to sign their name when they fill out their application.)

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Grammar Tips from The Washington Post
In addition to word usage, there were several sessions that, as is every good copy editor’s dream, dug into the deep, shadowy depths of grammar. I compiled a list of my 6 favorite grammar reminders that Washington Post Editor Bill Walsh clarified in his session.
  1. One of those are plural.
  • Bob is one of those people who hates cats. Incorrect
  • Bob is one of those people who hate cats. Correct
          (Who refers to those people, not Bob, and therefore requires the plural verb agreement.)
   2.    Don’t treat collective nouns as singular. 
  • A host of problems are blamed on the decline of industrial cities. 
   3.    Clarify which one if it could be ambiguous.
  • Last January (Needs a year, especially if the current month is February.)
  • Illinois senator (Is he an Illinois state senator, or a US senator from Illinois?)
   4.    Test for equal-weighted adjectives.
  • Replace it with the correct laminated document.
    • Laminated weighs more than correct because you would never say “a correct and laminated document.”
  • Shown below is approved, standard signage for cubicles.
    • Approved and standard have equal weight because you could say "an approved and standard sign." 
   5.    Don’t delete that if it avoids confusion.
  • The investigator said they believed Bazzano….was lying.
  • The investigator said they believed that Bazzano was lying.
   6.    Don’t treat the reader like an idiot at maintain style or consistency.
  • (President Barack) Obama (Unnecessary!)

More ACES gems to come,
Victoria

  

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